May 9, 2012 by jpenstroke
keeping to my walk
eyes lingering on dampened
swash of leaf
sweet tremble signals
Jane Penland Hoover
~keep, dampen, tremble~
Three Word Wednesday
Posted in haiku/senyru/tanka | 3 Comments
very nice. ‘swash of leaf’ I like a lot
I love that nature walk.
Love how you draw us into the very present moment, Jane! Excellent tanka!
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